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Sunday, April 27, 2008

East Canyon Haiku

pacing and Chasing
now four climb a mountain pass
"ping" a wheel spoke breaks

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6 comments:

old school said...

You forgot the third line:

popped and dropped by an olympian, a teenager, and a dude from park city

Gary said...

Must have been why that wheel was so noisy. I am sure you would have rather found the problem after the race though.

Jared said...

old school: that's 20 syllables in one line and offensive to my samurai culture

Note that I did make use of the word/expression "Chasing," alluding to, of course, Chase P. "Billying" or "Demonging" simply doesn't work.

Jared said...

old school: that's 20 syllables in one line and offensive to my samurai culture

Note that I did make use of the word/expression "Chasing," alluding to, of course, Chase P. "Billying" or "Demonging" simply doesn't work.

Ian said...

Samurai:

When are we going to race together again? I'm at the gila right now with Demong himself, along with some other SLC and Park City crazies!

Jared said...

Ian, you absolutely rock. Nice win at the Gila. Keep it up. You'll be a Cat 1 soon. So, in response to your question: I doubt we'll be racing together in the near future.